Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]

Lolmander · #1 Nov. 5, 2018 01:52:50

Banner by: yourdesigner
Positions
Manager (Owns the shop): Lolmander
Assistant manager (Helps me run the shop and can request firing): yourdesigner ,
chewqueek101
Professional reviewer: Just a regular reviewer who has left good, honest reviews on 5 projects.
Reviewers (review things): CrimsonCrusade GoldenAldo PolarBear110 RainbowsToybox , Kneebones, vulcan_spectre, Dragonlord767
All reviewers must be constructive and not mean.
How to apply:

Position wanted:
Username:
Can you create honest reviews?:
Do you have experience writing reviews?:
Short resume/Why should we hire you:

Review format:
0-10 rating
Pros:
Cons:
And a short paragraph on what you can do to make your project better. (Or why it's perfect

)

All of the staff are given a free follow.
All reviews are free.

Reviews are left on the project.
If your project rating is more than 5/10, the person who rated it more than 5/10 will Love & Favorite it.

How to request a review:

Username:
Project name:
Project link
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.):
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?:

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Last edited by Lolmander (Dec. 27, 2018 19:22:22)

GottaLuvCatz · #2 Nov. 5, 2018 02:13:46

Username: GottaLuvCatz
Project name: Pie Simulator V.1
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/259439834/
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Are you able to say it nicely? If so, then yes.

Last edited by GottaLuvCatz (Nov. 5, 2018 02:14:11)

Lolmander · #3 Nov. 5, 2018 02:40:49

GottaLuvCatz wrote:
Username: GottaLuvCatz
Project name: Pie Simulator V.1
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/259439834/
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Are you able to say it nicely? If so, then yes.

Your review has been left on your project.

Lolmander · #4 Nov. 6, 2018 13:33:46

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AMMCoder · #5 Nov. 6, 2018 21:24:55

Username: AMMCoder
Project name: Diamond Run
Project link “The Link”
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes

Lolmander · #6 Nov. 6, 2018 21:40:50

AMMCoder wrote:
Username: AMMCoder
Project name: Diamond Run
Project link “The Link”
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes

8.25 out of 10
Pros: It's a fun, addictive game, I found it very fun.
Cons, In your run animation, make it so the character moves their arms when running, sometimes, when a small spike spawns on the ground, and a big one on the ceiling, it makes it quite difficult.
Fix the cons, maybe add a shop, And yeah, Great project!

yourdesigner · #7 Nov. 6, 2018 23:29:17

Would you like me to make you a banner for the shop?

DRAGN-FIRZ · #8 Nov. 7, 2018 02:19:38

Username: DRAGN-FIRZ
Project: House Clicker 3D!!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/251383939/
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes.

Last edited by DRAGN-FIRZ (Nov. 7, 2018 02:36:02)

Lolmander · #9 Nov. 7, 2018 02:19:48

yourdesigner wrote:
Would you like me to make you a banner for the shop?

Sure!

yourdesigner · #10 Nov. 7, 2018 21:14:07

How's this?

Lolmander · #11 Nov. 7, 2018 21:56:30

yourdesigner wrote:
How's this?

I love it!

kpltz · #12 Nov. 7, 2018 23:39:01

Username: Kpltz
Project name: Moon Dodge
Project link: Moon Dodge
Type of project: Scrolling jumper?
Are you able to take criticism even if the project isn't good? Totally, also I know I should put in music, everyone says that, so you don't have to say that

Lolmander · #13 Nov. 8, 2018 02:37:53

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tarekzaki · #14 Nov. 9, 2018 03:51:42

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Lolmander · #15 Nov. 9, 2018 03:52:45

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Lolmander · #16 Nov. 9, 2018 03:54:17

tarekzaki wrote:

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Thanks for bumping!

Lolmander · #17 Nov. 10, 2018 20:34:45

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yourdesigner · #18 Nov. 10, 2018 23:52:15

Position wanted: Assistant Manager
Username: @yourdesigner
Can you create honest reviews?: Yes
Do you have experience writing reviews?: No, but I have experience with coding/games
Short resume/Why should we hire you: I know a lot about what makes projects good/enjoyable (especially games) and I have 100+ followers on my alt. account @kpltz. I think I would be a good assistant manager because I can advertise for the shop and try to get more staff/customers!

kpltz · #19 Nov. 10, 2018 23:54:50

yourdesigner wrote:
Position wanted: Assistant Manager
Username: @yourdesigner
Can you create honest reviews?: Yes
Do you have experience writing reviews?: No, but I have experience with coding/games
Short resume/Why should we hire you: I know a lot about what makes projects good/enjoyable (especially games) and I have 100+ followers on my alt. account @kpltz. I think I would be a good assistant manager because I can advertise for the shop and try to get more staff/customers!

Just confirming that this is me

Last edited by kpltz (Nov. 10, 2018 23:55:04)

chewqueek101 · #20 Nov. 11, 2018 00:07:09

Position wanted: Assistant manager
Username: @chewqueek101
Can you create honest reviews?: Yes.
Do you have experience writing reviews?: Sorta.
Short resume/Why should we hire you: I know a lot about how not all critisisim is bad. I also understand that I am not the maker. Some people promise to do things and never do it. I can bring more views into the shop. I am not biased toward any one type of post so I could work at a review shop. I hope this seemed legit, It's 7:00.

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