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- bananaandchoc1
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ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.


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Choc’s Retail Reviews
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Choc’s Retail Reviews is inspired by ✎✎ ᑕᗩ丅'ᔕ ᔕᕼᗝᑭ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯ ᔕᕼᗝᑭ ✎✎ . Place an order and receive a review of your shop!
Last edited by bananaandchoc1 (July 7, 2020 18:07:34)
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Ts&Cs
Customers:
1. I can’t claim your order straight away; I’m not a robot.
2. I will not tolerate any rudeness from customers.
3. Proof of owner permission is compulsory.
Employees:
1. Make your application as detailed as possible
2. Include the word ‘Now’ in your application.
3. When reviewing a shop, follow this template: First Look: (#/10) (look over the front page, give a detailed review on the title, banner etc.) Customer Service: (#/10) (Place an order and review the customer service in detail here) Quality of Product: (#/10) (Review the quality of the finished product in detail here) Overall (#/10) (Review the shop as a whole, in detail)
4. Don’t accept staff applications. Doing so will result in a warning.
5. 2 warnings will result in you being fired.
6. Failure to comply with any of these rules will result in a warning.
7. Failure to respond to activity checks will result in a warning.
8. Do not include the word ‘Now’ in your application, doing so will result in you being rejected.
Last edited by bananaandchoc1 (June 7, 2020 17:27:10)
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Forms
Order a Review
1. Username:
2. Shop Link:
3. Owner’s Name:
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this:
5. Other:
Staff Application: - NOW OPEN!
Please Note: I will only accept 2 workers - I am going to be very selective so don’t be upset if I don’t pick you.
1. Username:
2. What shops are on you the BoD in?
3. Experience with reviewing shops (please include 2-5 examples):
4. How active are you on the forums (1-10)?
5. Why should I accept you?
6. Do you consent and agree to follow the terms all of the time?
7. Other:
Receive a Monthly Review:
1. Username:
2. Shop Link:
3. Owner’s Name:
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this:
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one):
Stop Receiving a Monthly Review:
1. Username:
2. Shop Name:
3. Reason you want to stop:
4. Proof of permission from owner to do this:
5. Other:
Partner with Us:
1. Username:
2. Shop Link:
3. Banner BBCode:
4. Why should you partner with us?
5. Other:
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ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Orders
Monthly Reviews:
(Shop || Owner)
Lightning Studios || lightningspark6545
Nature Shop || lunastarckb
Bear-y Best Banners || Arxsi_
Nougat Shoppe || DancingNekoGirl
Normal Reviews:
N/a
Done:
Lightning Studios Review #1
The Nature Shop Review #1
Bear-y Best Banners Review #1
Gobo’s Department Store Review
Hedgehog Corner 3.0 Review
Nougat Shoppe Review #1
Spritesmasher Shop Review
Scratchazon Shop Review
Last edited by bananaandchoc1 (June 23, 2020 08:22:17)
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Employees
{NOW HIRING!} Currently None.
Partners:
Currently none.
Last edited by bananaandchoc1 (June 11, 2020 13:55:17)
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Reserved just incase

- lightningspark6545
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: look at my icon
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other: none
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other: none
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: look at my iconI’ll get it done ASAP!
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other: none

- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Lightning Studios Review #1
First Look (8.5/10):Hope this helps!
The first thing anyone’s going to see is the title. It has a fancy font, which is a nice touch, but it is a tad small, meaning it may be easily overlooked. You could also add a couple symbols (e.g. ⬅️➡️✅✔️). However, the tag line really suits the shop.
I like the layout of the shop, but I think you could be more consistent with putting the same BBCode in your post titles, and you could remove some of the underlines, as it makes the text harder to read. Also, you probably shouldn’t colour the text yellow, as it is very hard to read.
It is good how you’ve actually linked Buzzy Bee Banners and CraftGirl-HAS, as not many people/shops actually do that! You could’ve linked xxHam_Sandwichxx too.
Members and Advertisements are a unique touch, which I like! Overall, at a first glance, your shop seems good!
Customer Service (9.5/10):
My order was taken within half an hour (considering time zones) which was impressive! It was then completed within around 10-20 minutes of it being taken. Some shops offer faster service but this was still good. When finished, I got a lovely message on my profile. My only criticism would be that workers don’t ask for customers to contact the worker on their profile if they need any changes. Maybe it was just the employee. Overall, amazing service!
Quality of Product (9.5/10):
I gave rather broad specifications, and my order was done rather well! I did not want anything changed, so I can’t really say anything about that, but my only tiny criticism is to add a border. I am pleasantly surprised by this
Overall (9/10):
I think that this shop has amazing potential, and could become really popular! As mentioned above, you could tweak the BBCode a little, but other than that, this shop is amazing.

Last edited by bananaandchoc1 (June 8, 2020 11:44:50)
- lightningspark6545
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
-snipThanks!
Hope this helps!
Last edited by lightningspark6545 (June 8, 2020 10:39:23)
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
No problem!-snipThanks!
Hope this helps!
- lightningspark6545
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: lightningspark6545
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): monthly review
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): monthly review
- lightningspark6545
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: lightningspark6545Ok, I’ll review your shop next on 8th July (around that time)
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914
3. Owner’s Name: me
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: yes
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): monthly review
- DefeattheHuns
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: DefeattheHuns
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406487/
3. Owner’s Name: DefeattheHuns
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: Go ahead
5. Other: Nope
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406487/
3. Owner’s Name: DefeattheHuns
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: Go ahead
5. Other: Nope
- lunastarckb
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100+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Receive a Monthly Review:
1. Username: Lunastarckb
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406622/
3. Owner’s Name: lunastarckb
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: I am owner
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): I would like monthly reviews!
1. Username: Lunastarckb
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406622/
3. Owner’s Name: lunastarckb
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: I am owner
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): I would like monthly reviews!
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
1. Username: DefeattheHunsOkay, I’ll get to work ASAP!
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406487/
3. Owner’s Name: DefeattheHuns
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: Go ahead
5. Other: Nope
- bananaandchoc1
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1000+ posts
ᑕᕼᗝᑕ’ᔕ ᖇᗴ丅ᗩᎥᒪ ᖇᗴᐯᎥᗴᗯᔕ ~~ We’re closed, I’m sorry.
Receive a Monthly Review:I’ll do it ASAP!
1. Username: Lunastarckb
2. Shop Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/406622/
3. Owner’s Name: lunastarckb
4. Proof that you have permission from the owner to do this: I am owner
5. Other (please say you want a monthly review or I will just give you a normal one): I would like monthly reviews!

