Thank you for your mail. I am doing well in Boston. This is my homepage, so(-->where) you can see some picture(-->pictures) of Boston I took.
http://plaza.rakuten.co.jp/troyuniversity/
I am still learning English. So(don't need "so", or else use a comma instead of ".") please check your mail box often to check my exercise in English. I would like you to check my sentences like this.(-->: instead of .)
I are (-->am) a Japanese student.
The style is (-->makes it) easy to find where my mistake is.
Please tell your father that(-->to) please take all my property I left because Yoshiko moved out (of) the place we used to live.
I made a promise that your dad can take all my stuffs(-->stuff) after I leaving(-->left). So please contact with(don't need "with") Yoshiko.