When I'm working on draft product, I think that I have used my findings from my research pretty good because my research was pretty much from internet and the magazine I bought from Japan. When I talked about for example on-plane swing in golf, that was based on the DVD that was together with the magazine. One problem is that throughout this Personal Project, I have to keep in mind that I have to relate all this project with the AoI and essential question. my essential question was:
How can my understanding help people who are starting to learn golf?
To talk about my essential question, I think it is about how effectively I can demonstrate or communicate my understanding of golf for their benefit. When I say effectively, it should be able to tell as much information as I can to the audience, in detailed way so that the audience can refer to my product to help with their golf swing. Right now, I am developing my product in order for me to communicate my understanding in detailed way which audience can easily understand. In a way, I am developing my essential question because I am thinking about how effectively I can demonstrate my understanding to others and trying to find a best way to do that. I have not developed much about my AoI which is community and service. However I think that this comes after I'm done with my product and after surveying to the target audience. I can use the audience responce and reflect on it and refer or connect the feedback based on AoI. When it comes to talking about applying informations effectively, like I mentioned, I am now developing how I can do that which is part of my essential question. To modify my to improve my result, I think this is something that I can reflect back on after I'm done with my product. Something that requires audience opinion, should come after I'm done with the product because I am going to survey to the audience and ask question that will assess quality of my product. And based on the feedback I got from the audience, I will refer that to modification of my results and essential question.