RPP-Exploration wrote:

dude341 wrote:

I would like 2 reviews.
dude341 PC Tutorials - Episode 1: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/145829295/
Division Workaround: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/127384838/

Sorry - can’t review first one as don’t have right PC

3lejas wrote:

Can you reveiw my project ? Sorry if it’s not very good!

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8/10

Good
Informative title
Clear instructions and diagrams
Credit to all that contributed
Instructions (next to credits - not on the slides) tell you exactly what this applies to
Very neat!

Bad
No way to go back to see previous steps (add ‘when left arrow clicked, previous slide’).
2nd last slide has very small writing (just increase size for better visual)
Some images are slightly pixelated and unclear. NOTE: This is just a small problem and could be fixed by changing images source (screenshot, internet)

O v e r a l l, very informative and does exactly what it needs to - my improvements are more on graphics. This is very good.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 004

RPP-Exploration wrote:

3lejas wrote:

Can you reveiw my project ? Sorry if it’s not very good!

OK

3lejas wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

3lejas wrote:

Can you reveiw my project ? Sorry if it’s not very good!

OK

Thanks!

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 4.5/10

Good
Works EVERY TIME

Bad
No instructions

I m p r o v e

These things may improve your project:
Change the background
Making the cat say the answer (use this block)

say (answer variable) for (2) secs

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 005

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8.5/10

Good
Great Art!
Exciting Name
Easy to move about
Clear Instructions

Bad
No way to restart except pressing Green Flag (just add the same scripts you have for green flag under ‘when r clicked’)
It can be unclear what flavour a sushi is (making the coloured bit bigger would make a world of difference)

O v e r a l l, this is a fun, addictive little game that has a lot of potential (if you put it in Show and Tell forum it might get really big).

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 006

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/145829295/ I hope it helps anyone who reads it.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8/10

Good
Informative title
Clear instructions and diagrams
Credit to all that contributed
Instructions (next to credits - not on the slides) tell you exactly what this applies to
Very neat!

Bad
No way to go back to see previous steps (add ‘when left arrow clicked, previous slide’).
2nd last slide has very small writing (just increase size for better visual)
Some images are slightly pixelated and unclear. NOTE: This is just a small problem and could be fixed by changing images source (screenshot, internet)

O v e r a l l, very informative and does exactly what it needs to - my improvements are more on graphics. This is very good.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 004

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/127384838/ I am sorry that it is not as informative as most of my reviews but there was less to the project.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 4.5/10

Good
Works EVERY TIME

Bad
No instructions

I m p r o v e

These things may improve your project:
Change the background
Making the cat say the answer (use this block)

say (answer variable) for (2) secs

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 005

dude341 wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/145829295/ I hope it helps anyone who reads it.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8/10

Good
Informative title
Clear instructions and diagrams
Credit to all that contributed
Instructions (next to credits - not on the slides) tell you exactly what this applies to
Very neat!

Bad
No way to go back to see previous steps (add ‘when left arrow clicked, previous slide’).
2nd last slide has very small writing (just increase size for better visual)
Some images are slightly pixelated and unclear. NOTE: This is just a small problem and could be fixed by changing images source (screenshot, internet)

O v e r a l l, very informative and does exactly what it needs to - my improvements are more on graphics. This is very good.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 004

Thanks! Note I did use a HD screenshot tool, however Scratch makes all imported images pixelated

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/127384838/ I am sorry that it is not as informative as most of my reviews but there was less to the project.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 4.5/10

Good
Works EVERY TIME

Bad
No instructions

I m p r o v e

These things may improve your project:
Change the background
Making the cat say the answer (use this block)

say (answer variable) for (2) secs

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 005

Thanks! I was more interested in looking for suggestions to the algorithm (it is a workaround for the division block meant to be used in projects, so no background).
Also, please close your colour tags (I had to manually close them here otherwise my text would be purple)

RPP-Exploration wrote:

dude341 wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/145829295/ I hope it helps anyone who reads it.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8/10

Good
Informative title
Clear instructions and diagrams
Credit to all that contributed
Instructions (next to credits - not on the slides) tell you exactly what this applies to
Very neat!

Bad
No way to go back to see previous steps (add ‘when left arrow clicked, previous slide’).
2nd last slide has very small writing (just increase size for better visual)
Some images are slightly pixelated and unclear. NOTE: This is just a small problem and could be fixed by changing images source (screenshot, internet)

O v e r a l l, very informative and does exactly what it needs to - my improvements are more on graphics. This is very good.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 004

Thanks! Note I did use a HD screenshot tool, however Scratch makes all imported images pixelated

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/127384838/ I am sorry that it is not as informative as most of my reviews but there was less to the project.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 4.5/10

Good
Works EVERY TIME

Bad
No instructions

I m p r o v e

These things may improve your project:
Change the background
Making the cat say the answer (use this block)

say (answer variable) for (2) secs

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 005

Thanks! I was more interested in looking for suggestions to the algorithm (it is a workaround for the division block meant to be used in projects, so no background).
Also, please close your colour tags (I had to manually close them here otherwise my text would be purple)

Sorry about the tags and the algorithm thing - but I don't think that I'll be the best person for the algorithm side of your projects

dude341 wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

dude341 wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/145829295/ I hope it helps anyone who reads it.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8/10

Good
Informative title
Clear instructions and diagrams
Credit to all that contributed
Instructions (next to credits - not on the slides) tell you exactly what this applies to
Very neat!

Bad
No way to go back to see previous steps (add ‘when left arrow clicked, previous slide’).
2nd last slide has very small writing (just increase size for better visual)
Some images are slightly pixelated and unclear. NOTE: This is just a small problem and could be fixed by changing images source (screenshot, internet)

O v e r a l l, very informative and does exactly what it needs to - my improvements are more on graphics. This is very good.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 004

Thanks! Note I did use a HD screenshot tool, however Scratch makes all imported images pixelated

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/127384838/ I am sorry that it is not as informative as most of my reviews but there was less to the project.

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 4.5/10

Good
Works EVERY TIME

Bad
No instructions

I m p r o v e

These things may improve your project:
Change the background
Making the cat say the answer (use this block)

say (answer variable) for (2) secs

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 005

Thanks! I was more interested in looking for suggestions to the algorithm (it is a workaround for the division block meant to be used in projects, so no background).
Also, please close your colour tags (I had to manually close them here otherwise my text would be purple)

Sorry about the tags and the algorithm thing - but I don't think that I'll be the best person for the algorithm side of your projects

Alright, thanks. Just keep the tag thing in mind :)

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for an amazingly addictive game:

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8.5/10

Good
Great Art!
Exciting Name
Easy to move about
Clear Instructions

Bad
No way to restart except pressing Green Flag (just add the same scripts you have for green flag under ‘when r clicked’)
It can be unclear what flavour a sushi is (making the coloured bit bigger would make a world of difference)

O v e r a l l, this is a fun, addictive little game that has a lot of potential (if you put it in Show and Tell forum it might get really big).

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 006

3lejas wrote:

RPP-Exploration wrote:

This is a review for an amazingly addictive game:

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Project
Score: 8.5/10

Good
Great Art!
Exciting Name
Easy to move about
Clear Instructions

Bad
No way to restart except pressing Green Flag (just add the same scripts you have for green flag under ‘when r clicked’)
It can be unclear what flavour a sushi is (making the coloured bit bigger would make a world of difference)

O v e r a l l, this is a fun, addictive little game that has a lot of potential (if you put it in Show and Tell forum it might get really big).

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 006

Thank you so much for the awesome reveiw! This really helped! I will recommend to others!

dude341 wrote:

Hi there, would you like to become partners with my shop? https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/293749/

R a i n b o w R e v i e w
Type: Shop
Score: 9.1/10

Good
Super-Quick Service
Checks exactly what customer wants (even when very vague)
Polite
Profile Notification
Lots of choices of finished product to ensure maximum satisfaction.

Bad
It is quite hard and time-consuming to transfer all info into a project (I suggest putting the script in a project that can be backpacked and used more easily.
SUGGESTION: Brand your shop (colours, mascot) There are shops (eg. The Space Shop) who do this as a package. It will make your shop more memorable.
On the title, the letters in circles are less readable so people don't know what you are.

O v e r a l l, you are a very good shop: if you bump regularly and continue the good work, you could build a great reputation.

A review from Rainbow Reviews .
Order Code: 007