enricondal wrote:

Hi everyone! I have just found this place and I would like to share my project so you can review it and tell me how it is. Thanks in advance!

Username: enricondal
Name of the project: Dark Zone
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/36723716/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: In Dark Zone you take control of a spaceship and you try to survive in space as much as possible by dodging asteroids. To help you there are three different “power-ups” that you'll get for surviving a specific amount of time. The game has also got a cloud-data Hall of fame with the 5 best scores.
Harshness: Say what you have to say, I can handle it
Other notes: The game was published a long time ago but I'm trying to improve it as much as possible and see where it can get. In the Instructions writen part of the project there can be found some more ‘deep’ explanations and in the Notes and Credits one, there are all the updates that have been added, just in case you're curious. One last thing, I would like to get help in the code that makes the spaceship move, because if it's moven very slowly by the player, it seems kinda weird.

Thanks for everything! I appreciate what you are doing!

AfraidRacer wrote:

Taken! A suggestion, make a different project as a copy of this and with powerups appearing more frequently. It's way too difficult. I'll give the final review then. By the way, the mouse problem seems to happen not because of the coding but something else. I don't know much about it, so posting on the Help With Scripts Forum will help.

enricondal wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

Taken! A suggestion, make a different project as a copy of this and with powerups appearing more frequently. It's way too difficult. I'll give the final review then. By the way, the mouse problem seems to happen not because of the coding but something else. I don't know much about it, so posting on the Help With Scripts Forum will help.

You mean that you'll review the game is created now (Dark Zone) or the one I'll create (Dark Zone 2, I guess)? Because if it's the one I have to create, it may take me some time and now I don't have too much of that. Thanks for the tips on the mouse problem by the way!

enricondal wrote:

Hi everyone! I have just found this place and I would like to share my project so you can review it and tell me how it is. Thanks in advance!

Username: enricondal
Name of the project: Dark Zone
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/36723716/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: In Dark Zone you take control of a spaceship and you try to survive in space as much as possible by dodging asteroids. To help you there are three different “power-ups” that you'll get for surviving a specific amount of time. The game has also got a cloud-data Hall of fame with the 5 best scores.
Harshness: Say what you have to say, I can handle it
Other notes: The game was published a long time ago but I'm trying to improve it as much as possible and see where it can get. In the Instructions writen part of the project there can be found some more ‘deep’ explanations and in the Notes and Credits one, there are all the updates that have been added, just in case you're curious. One last thing, I would like to get help in the code that makes the spaceship move, because if it's moven very slowly by the player, it seems kinda weird.

Thanks for everything! I appreciate what you are doing!

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral !!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

TheRealNetherBefore wrote:

Hey, would you review a whole series of projects or is that asking too much?

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral !!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

Oh yeah you're right, kind of harsh. Lemme change that (tbh i like to be harsh when its the truth but ill change that for the sake of Ordercentral)

And what do you mean the kind of review they want?

ProLabs wrote:

Username: ProLabs
Name of the project: Twin Spheres
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/239197998/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: The goal is to protect the Earth with two spheres revolving around it. You can upgrade each of your spheres with the cash you get by destroying the ennemies.
Harshness: Be perfectly honest. I want to make my game better!
Other notes: Hope you enjoy this game!

Thanks a lot!

AfraidRacer wrote:

ProLabs wrote:

Username: ProLabs
Name of the project: Twin Spheres
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/239197998/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: The goal is to protect the Earth with two spheres revolving around it. You can upgrade each of your spheres with the cash you get by destroying the ennemies.
Harshness: Be perfectly honest. I want to make my game better!
Other notes: Hope you enjoy this game!

Thanks a lot!

Taken! Give me some time, maybe 2-3 hours.

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral !!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

Oh yeah you're right, kind of harsh. Lemme change that (tbh i like to be harsh when its the truth but ill change that for the sake of Ordercentral)

And what do you mean the kind of review they want?

Y'know, Comprehensive Review, Custom Review, Short Review etc. Check on the OP.

sti_scratch wrote:

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ProLabs wrote:

Username: ProLabs
Name of the project: Twin Spheres
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/239197998/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: The goal is to protect the Earth with two spheres revolving around it. You can upgrade each of your spheres with the cash you get by destroying the ennemies.
Harshness: Be perfectly honest. I want to make my game better!
Other notes: Hope you enjoy this game!

Thanks a lot!

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

<snip>

Okay, otherwise I'll do a Custom Review.

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral !!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

Oh yeah you're right, kind of harsh. Lemme change that (tbh i like to be harsh when its the truth but ill change that for the sake of Ordercentral)

And what do you mean the kind of review they want?

Y'know, Comprehensive Review, Custom Review, Short Review etc. Check on the OP.

I think everyone would want a comprehensive review… The form I put at Ordercentral is for comprehensive review.

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

<snip>

Okay, otherwise I'll do a Custom Review.

Err… that inappropriately snipped quote was meant to be the one listed below, right?

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral !!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

Oh yeah you're right, kind of harsh. Lemme change that (tbh i like to be harsh when its the truth but ill change that for the sake of Ordercentral)

And what do you mean the kind of review they want?

Y'know, Comprehensive Review, Custom Review, Short Review etc. Check on the OP.

I think everyone would want a comprehensive review… The form I put at Ordercentral is for comprehensive review.

apgonscratch wrote:

Username: @apgonscratch
Name of the project: “Scratch Cat's Level Editor”

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/211763687/

What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive, please!

Brief Description of the project: A tile based level editor where the player takes control of Scratch Cat. You can build, play, save or load, and more!

Harshness: Just as harsh as your usual reviews. Just keep in mind that some sprites are placeholder graphics (for now)

Other Notes: none

Thanks!

AfraidRacer wrote:

apgonscratch wrote:

Username: @apgonscratch
Name of the project: “Scratch Cat's Level Editor”

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/211763687/

What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive, please!

Brief Description of the project: A tile based level editor where the player takes control of Scratch Cat. You can build, play, save or load, and more!

Harshness: Just as harsh as your usual reviews. Just keep in mind that some sprites are placeholder graphics (for now)

Other Notes: none

Thanks!

Taken! Will be done in 1 hour.