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she is xDD that's partially why it's funny
i… can't help you with that sobb :,))
maybe take a look at some other apps and see if there are any colors close to either? i have no idea jskhsl
also also i had this idea yesterday but i wanted to make some art for sdl, i was originally thinking winter but i thought that'd be too soon so i changed it to new year- had half of math free so i started work on it :0 i can put it on the canva maybe? or do you want to wait until i actually have more progress because i've really only drawn my base outline ahaha- should i just draw your hair like your current pfp? (and i already pretty much have our poses down, you'd be very delighted to see it i think i just hope it's to character aha)
edit: the sheer fact i never got past like- three pages before this-
i… can't help you with that sobb :,))
maybe take a look at some other apps and see if there are any colors close to either? i have no idea jskhsl
also also i had this idea yesterday but i wanted to make some art for sdl, i was originally thinking winter but i thought that'd be too soon so i changed it to new year- had half of math free so i started work on it :0 i can put it on the canva maybe? or do you want to wait until i actually have more progress because i've really only drawn my base outline ahaha- should i just draw your hair like your current pfp? (and i already pretty much have our poses down, you'd be very delighted to see it i think i just hope it's to character aha)
edit: the sheer fact i never got past like- three pages before this-
Last edited by yumetopia (Dec. 19, 2024 18:23:47)
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I'm probably just gonna go ahead and change it lol- Simply for the fact that it would be a lot more cohesive xD.
Also, I'll send you the canva docs for the R2 distributions, and you can put them on there.
Snap.:O That sounds really cool, actually- ARE WE FINALLY GETTING A SDL STAFF PICTURE. XDDDD If you'd like, sure, but I wouldn't mind you keeping it a surprise until you're done- Up to you. : D
Also, I'll send you the canva docs for the R2 distributions, and you can put them on there.
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yume's (old) writing thread!
ooo ooo okay! sounds good hehe
i'll just send snippets then ^^
i'll just send snippets then ^^
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distributing processik you have the links but to make it easier for you to paste in the description!
P / WAVE - IVE
R / LOCO - ITZY (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyPF1OGQ/erE840X_a4Krky6VQOe8LA/edit?utm_content=DAGZyPF1OGQ&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
I / Choices - LE SSERAFIM
S / ELEVEN - IVE (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyYpIOzs/ZNmH7N7D6hybeK70P1QG-g/edit?utm_content=DAGZyYpIOzs&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
M / YEPPI YEPPI - aespa (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyb9zz0o/c5LhY9kB6CcET2VGGKf6Kw/edit?utm_content=DAGZyb9zz0o&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
Last edited by yumetopia (Dec. 20, 2024 02:47:36)
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update- probably just gonna finish loco today, maybe wave but we'll see (i just feel like choices would be harder ahaha idk why)
edit: loco is done, i'll also do wave because hw procrastination ;w;
edit: loco is done, i'll also do wave because hw procrastination ;w;
Last edited by yumetopia (Dec. 20, 2024 02:48:11)
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Just checked them all out, those look great! Just another reminder though, you can start the evaluations anytime- I'll make slides for that as well and put that on another video so just fill those in when you're ready.
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got it ^^
went into the DIMENXION, came back out with the rest
also i accidentally made wxs in choices i didn't even notice until the end sob (that one doesn't have part markings yet but i need to leave for period 5 soon so sending it first)
went into the DIMENXION, came back out with the rest
distributing processi couldn't get the line dist version of choices so that's just a ccl unfortunately, should i just change all of them to keep it fair-?
P / WAVE - IVE (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyN3cL2w/yiu8NdoGwoFvzqNSEcNm-w/edit?utm_content=DAGZyN3cL2w&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
R / LOCO - ITZY (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyPF1OGQ/erE840X_a4Krky6VQOe8LA/edit?utm_content=DAGZyPF1OGQ&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
I / Choices - LE SSERAFIM
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyWB2T1U/TrytpyNc34LSerbJqmitaA/edit?utm_content=DAGZyWB2T1U&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
S / ELEVEN - IVE (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyYpIOzs/ZNmH7N7D6hybeK70P1QG-g/edit?utm_content=DAGZyYpIOzs&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
M / YEPPI YEPPI - aespa (done)
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGZyb9zz0o/c5LhY9kB6CcET2VGGKf6Kw/edit?utm_content=DAGZyb9zz0o&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
also i accidentally made wxs in choices i didn't even notice until the end sob (that one doesn't have part markings yet but i need to leave for period 5 soon so sending it first)
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Episode 2 is almost ready, I wrote up some dialogue for you so hopefully those are in character :,D I'd ask beforehand but I just really need to get this out soon, this only contains Glint and Flame so the other three would release later on.
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YUME HELP- THIS MIXING IS LIKE- JHDSKJFHKALSFH- THESE TEAMS WANT ME DEAD I FEAR.
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YUME HELP- THIS MIXING IS LIKE- JHDSKJFHKALSFH- THESE TEAMS WANT ME DEAD I FEAR.shjkfgskfgak do you want me to help mix is that what you want
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You don't have to lol- just finish up the evaluations if you can, and the individual thumbsYUME HELP- THIS MIXING IS LIKE- JHDSKJFHKALSFH- THESE TEAMS WANT ME DEAD I FEAR.shjkfgskfgak do you want me to help mix is that what you want

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alr!! HELP I ALMOST FORGOT ABOUT THOSE HGDKASG SORRY SOBB-You don't have to lol- just finish up the evaluations if you can, and the individual thumbsYUME HELP- THIS MIXING IS LIKE- JHDSKJFHKALSFH- THESE TEAMS WANT ME DEAD I FEAR.shjkfgskfgak do you want me to help mix is that what you want
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https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1106837644/editor/
so i tried singing a robin song + one line of eunoia hehe
so i tried singing a robin song + one line of eunoia hehe
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https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1106837644/editor/I'll listen later!
so i tried singing a robin song + one line of eunoia hehe
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sadhfkhsdjahfadl blau just told me i do sound like chevyhttps://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1106837644/editor/I'll listen later!
so i tried singing a robin song + one line of eunoia hehe
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Sailing on dreams, we’ll depart
Getting closer to your heart
Waiting on, it’s just the start
Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
3, 2, 1, into restart
No, they can’t drive us apart
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Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
burst of motivation to finish this xD I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO FOR THAT LINE and whether the first even makes sense, i also decided that i'll have ‘it’ for the choruses until the last one which will be ‘you’ like the original
Getting closer to your heart
Waiting on, it’s just the start
Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
3, 2, 1, into restart
No, they can’t drive us apart
?
Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
burst of motivation to finish this xD I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO FOR THAT LINE and whether the first even makes sense, i also decided that i'll have ‘it’ for the choruses until the last one which will be ‘you’ like the original
- Black__Hole
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This is just me trying to get more posts on this account xD Anyways. Re-ordered two lines (including the initially empty one), how does this sound?
Sailing on dreams, we’ll depart
Getting closer to your heart
Waiting on, it’s just the start
Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
3, 2, 1, into restart
Life’s a show, so play your part
No, they can’t drive us apart
Yeah, I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
I’ll love, I’ll love, I’ll love it
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wait skjdfhdgflkasgdl that actually looks pretty good aaah- thank you :,0 i'll send it to some others to look over as well-
these lyrics are now yume/sooeun coded lol pfft-
these lyrics are now yume/sooeun coded lol pfft-
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wait skjdfhdgflkasgdl that actually looks pretty good aaah- thank you :,0 i'll send it to some others to look over as well-Alright, no problem! Call me up when you need the rest- I actually think it'd be fun to do a post-chorus, in which the last chorus has the original post-chorus first and then the song would end with what was originally the chorus (But as you said, with a lyric change), just an idea
these lyrics are now yume/sooeun coded lol pfft-

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chorus first and then the song would end with what was originally the chorus (But as you said, with a lyric change), just an ideano you're genuinely crazy (in a good way) like- thank you sobb- i had literally no idea what else to fill it with