BRIEF COMMENT Good eye contact ! Good facial expression ! Well controlled voice. The content of your speech was very interesting.
wonderful ! Keep studying English.
BRIEF COMMENT Excellent and very professional delivery. Great use of dynamics ,pitch,and gestures!!! Your phrasing is very natural. Please practice smoothing out some of your longer words and phrases . and "th", "t", "r" sounds. Soon you will sound like a native speaker! I wish I could see you perform theatre!!
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Voice level is good , too. You could improve your speech by putting some pauses or stress , speed -fast or slow - would be effective , too.
BRIEF COMMENT Great natural gestures and emotion in your voice.
Keep working on your pronunciation "th" "l" "r" sounds, and articulating each word while keeping the flow. Nice job