I was born in Kure, Hiroshima. Hiroshima city is very famous forbeingthe world-class peaceful city but I’m afraid you haven’t heard of Kure. Kure is the third biggest city in Hiroshima prefecture. Kure is known as a naval port. The naval academy has been here since 1888. And Kure is popular for being
She was the largest ship ever constructed and a film based on the Yamato and her crew was made a few years ago. The naval town didn’t have any popular things and sightseeing spots because of military secrecy. But in this peace time, nobody cares about them. Kure city administration constructed Yamato Museum in order to introduce the naval town and shipbuilding. And now many people visit there. Kure has become
a tourist attraction. I grew up seeing battleships and submarines. So smelling the salty scent always reminds me of my hometown.
↑ 先生の校正チェック済み。
famous for や popular forについて。forの後ろに名詞が来ても文法的に間違いではないけど、beingをつけた方がより自然に聞こえるといわれました。 それから、大和について先生は何も知らないとのことで、短い歴史を追加してね、と前回言われていたので、追加しました。